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@@ -310,7 +310,7 @@ active nodes.
 set of  points called  primary points~\cite{idrees2014coverage}. We  assume that
 the sensing  disk defined by a  sensor is covered  if all the primary  points of
 this  sensor are  covered.   By knowing  the position  of  wireless sensor  node
-(centered at  the the  position $\left(p_x,p_y\right)$)  and it's  sensing range
+(centered at  the the  position $\left(p_x,p_y\right)$)  and its  sensing range
 $R_s$,  we define  up to  25 primary  points $X_1$  to $X_{25}$  as decribed  on
 Figure~\ref{fig1}. The optimal number of primary points is investigated in
 section~\ref{ch4:sec:04:06}.
@@ -644,16 +644,16 @@ $W_{U}$ & $|P|^2$ \\
   solver returns  the best solution  found, which  is not necessary  the optimal
   one. In practice, we only set time  limit values for $T=5$ and $T=7$. In fact,
   for $T=5$ we limited the time for  250~nodes, whereas for $T=7$ it was for the
-  three  largest network  sizes.  Therefore  we used  the  following values  (in
+  three  largest network  sizes.  Therefore  we  used the  following values  (in
   second): 0.03 for  250~nodes when $T=5$, while for $T=7$  we chose 0.03, 0.06,
-  and 0.08 for respectively 150, 200, and 250~nodes.
-  These time limit thresholds have been  set empirically. The basic idea consists
-  in considering  the average execution  time to  solve the integer  programs to
-  optimality, then in  dividing this average time by three  to set the threshold
-  value.  After that,  this threshold value is increased if  necessary so that
-  the solver is able  to deliver a feasible solution within  the time limit.  In
-  fact, selecting the optimal values for the time limits will be investigated in
-  the future.}
+  and  0.08  for  respectively  150,  200,  and  250~nodes.   These  time  limit
+  thresholds  have been  set  empirically. The  basic idea  is  to consider  the
+  average execution  time to solve  the integer  programs to optimality  for 100
+  nodes and then to adjust the time linearly according to the increasing network
+  size. After that,  this threshold value is increased if  necessary so that the
+  solver is able to deliver a feasible  solution within the time limit. In fact,
+  selecting the optimal  values for the time limits will  be investigated in the
+  future.}
 
  In the  following, we will make  comparisons with two other  methods. The first
  method,  called DESK  and proposed  by  \cite{ChinhVu}, is  a full  distributed
@@ -663,13 +663,13 @@ $W_{U}$ & $|P|^2$ \\
  phase time.
 
 Some preliminary experiments were performed to study the choice of the number of
-subregions  which subdivides  the  sensing field,  considering different  network
+subregions  which subdivides  the sensing  field, considering  different network
 sizes. They show that as the number of subregions increases, so does the network
 lifetime. Moreover,  it makes  the MuDiLCO protocol  more robust  against random
-network  disconnection due  to node  failures.  However,  too  many subdivisions
-reduce the advantage  of the optimization. In fact, there  is a balance between
-the  benefit  from the  optimization  and the  execution  time  needed to  solve
-it. In the following we have set the number of subregions to 16.
+network  disconnection due  to node  failures.  However,  too many  subdivisions
+reduce the  advantage of the optimization.  In fact, there is  a balance between
+the benefit from the optimization and the  execution time needed to solve it. In
+the following we have set the number of subregions to 16.
 
 \subsection{Energy model}
 
@@ -877,7 +877,7 @@ scheduling based on optimization in  MuDiLCO maintains higher coverage ratios of
 the area of interest  for a larger number of rounds. It  also means that MuDiLCO
 saves more energy,  with less dead nodes,  at most for several  rounds, and thus
 should  extend the  network lifetime.  \textcolor{blue}{MuDiLCO-7 seems  to have
-  most of the  time the best coverage  ratio up to round~80,  after MuDiLCO-5 is
+  most of the  time the best coverage  ratio up to round~80,  after that MuDiLCO-5 is
   slightly better.}
 
 \begin{figure}[ht!]
@@ -950,7 +950,7 @@ consumed during the different status of the sensor node.
 
 \textcolor{blue}{Energy consumption increases with the  size of the networks and
   the  number  of  rounds.   The curve  Unlimited-MuDiLCO-7  shows  that  energy
-  consumption due to  the time spent to solve the  integer program to optimality
+  consumption due to  the time spent to  optimally solve the  integer program
   increases drastically with  the size of the network. When  the resolution time
   is limited for large network sizes, the energy consumption remains of the same
   order whatever the MuDiLCO version. As can be seen with MuDiLCO-7.}
@@ -987,7 +987,7 @@ into  account to  schedule  the sensing  phase. \textcolor{blue}{Obviously,  the
   become  quickly unsuitable  for  a  sensor node,  especially  when the  sensor
   network size  increases as  demonstrated by Unlimited-MuDiLCO-7.   Notice that
   for 250  nodes, we also  limited the execution  time for $T=5$,  otherwise the
-  execution time  would have  been above  MuDiLCO-7.  On the  one hand,  a large
+  execution time, denoted by Unlimited-MuDiLCO-5, is also above  MuDiLCO-7.  On the  one hand,  a large
   value  for  $T$  permits  to  reduce the  energy-overhead  due  to  the  three
   pre-sensing phases, on  the other hand a leader node  may waste a considerable
   amount of  energy to solve the  optimization problem. Thus, limiting  the time
@@ -1004,7 +1004,7 @@ node  density  which results  in  more  and more  redundant  nodes  that can  be
 deactivated and thus save energy.  Compared to the other approaches, our MuDiLCO
 protocol  maximizes the  lifetime of  the network.   In particular  the gain  in
 lifetime for a coverage  over 95\%, and a network of  250~nodes, is greater than
-38\% when switching from GAF to MuDiLCO-5.
+43\% when switching from GAF to MuDiLCO-5.
 %The lower performance that can be observed  for MuDiLCO-7 in case
 %of  $Lifetime_{95}$  with  large  wireless  sensor  networks  results  from  the
 %difficulty  of the optimization  problem to  be solved  by the  integer program.
@@ -1017,8 +1017,8 @@ lifetime for a coverage  over 95\%, and a network of  250~nodes, is greater than
   rather than limiting the execution time,  similar results might be obtained by
   replacing  the  computation of  the  exact  solution  with  the finding  of  a
   suboptimal  one using  a  heuristic  approach. For  our  simulation setup  and
-  considering  the different  metrics, MuDiLCO-5  seems  to be  the most  suited
-  method in comparison with MuDiLCO-7.}
+  considering  the different  metrics, MuDiLCO-5  seems  to be  the best  suited
+  method compared to MuDiLCO-7.}
 
 \begin{figure}[t!]
   \centering
