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@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ cooperate and make these decisions was not discussed.\\
 
 \textcolor{red}{\textbf{\textsc{Reviewer's response:} I see at the end of page 8 the description of the INFO packet. However, you are not including any description of the position coordinates, remaining energy, sensor node ID, etc. in the write up. I suggest adding this into the write up to make the communication clear.}}\\
 
-\textcolor{green}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:}  blbla}}\\
+\textcolor{green}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:}  Right, we have included more description about the INFO packet and the ActiveSleep packet into the write up at the end of section~3.}}\\
 
 \noindent {\bf 7.} The methodology is implemented in OMNeT++ (network simulator)
 and tested  against 2 existing algorithms  and a previously developed  method by
@@ -83,12 +83,12 @@ methods. The results are similar to previous work done by their team.\\
 \textcolor{red}{\textbf{\textsc{Reviewer's response:}  
 I agree that you should show the same performance indicators and that this paper is
 about the way you formulated the problem. The mathematical optimization model is the main
-contribution but it’s less convincing since the results are slightly better if not the same for the two
+contribution but it's less convincing since the results are slightly better if not the same for the two
 methodologies you have developed. Could you include some other measure that shows that the
 PeCO is better? Maybe include computation time or something that is as convincing as the energy
 consumed per sensor.}}
 
-\textcolor{green}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:}  blbla}}\\
+\textcolor{green}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:}  In fact, we defined in section 5.1 a new performance metric linked to the energy, called Energy Saving Ratio (ESR). We added a new section (5.2.3) in the result part related to this performance metric which shows that our PeCO protocol provides better energy saving compared with other approaches.}}\\
 
 
 
@@ -107,17 +107,15 @@ coverage ratio. \\
     the end of Section 5.2.4.}}\\
 
 \textcolor{red}{\textbf{\textsc{Reviewer's response:}   
-I’m glad you added the explanation. I am confused with your conclusion in the last
-sentence though, “DiLCO is better for coverage ratios near $100\%$, but in that case PeCO is not
-ineffective for the smallest network sizes”. I suggest adjusting it to something like this. “DiLCO
-outperforms PeCO when the coverage ratio is required to be $>90\%$, but PeCo extends the network
-lifetime significantly when coverage ratio can be relaxed. “ Also, can you add applications where
+I'm glad you added the explanation. I am confused with your conclusion in the last
+sentence though, "DiLCO is better for coverage ratios near $100\%$, but in that case PeCO is not ineffective for the smallest network sizes". I suggest adjusting it to something like this. "DiLCO outperforms PeCO when the coverage ratio is required to be $>90\%$, but PeCo extends the network lifetime significantly when coverage ratio can be relaxed." Also, can you add applications where
 you would want to have a coverage ratio of $50\%$? This seems like a very small ratio and as you
-increase it, DiLCO becomes the methodology that has the maximum network lifetime. If you don’t
-include application examples, your statement “Indeed there are applications that do not require a
-100$\%$ coverage of the area to be monitored.” stronger. }}
+increase it, DiLCO becomes the methodology that has the maximum network lifetime. If you don't
+include application examples, your statement "Indeed there are applications that do not require a
+100$\%$ coverage of the area to be monitored." stronger. }}
 
-\textcolor{green}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:}  blbla}}\\
+\textcolor{green}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} Thank you so much to your suggestion for adjusting the sentence in the end of Section 5.2.5. (previously Section 5.2.4.), It is done. 
+For the applications, we added some applications examples in the end of the sentence "Indeed there are applications that do not require a 100$\%$ coverage of the area to be monitored." as well as we changed the figure 10 (previously figure 9) by adding DilCO/70 and PecO/70 instead of DilCO/50 and PeCO/50 }}\\