From 03f7b8cc61ab12c78997141c2461438382a08925 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: couturie Date: Thu, 22 Oct 2015 21:05:05 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] correct anglais --- Example.tex | 59 ++++++++++++++-------------------- reponse.tex | 91 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++------------ 2 files changed, 95 insertions(+), 55 deletions(-) diff --git a/Example.tex b/Example.tex index b2b473f..042bfca 100644 --- a/Example.tex +++ b/Example.tex @@ -56,19 +56,8 @@ email: ali.idness@edu.univ-fcomte.fr,\\ $\lbrace$karine.deschinkel, michel.salom scheduling performed by each elected leader. This two-step process takes place periodically, in order to choose a small set of nodes remaining active for sensing during a time slot. Each set is built to ensure coverage at a low - energy cost, allowing to optimize the network lifetime. -%More precisely, a - %period consists of four phases: (i)~Information Exchange, (ii)~Leader - %Election, (iii)~Decision, and (iv)~Sensing. The decision process, which -% results in an activity scheduling vector, is carried out by a leader node -% through the solving of an integer program. -% MODIF - BEGIN - Simulations are conducted using the discret event simulator - OMNET++. We refer to the characterictics of a Medusa II sensor for - the energy consumption and the computation time. In comparison with - two other existing methods, our approach is able to increase the WSN - lifetime and provides improved coverage performance. } -% MODIF - END + energy cost, allowing to optimize the network lifetime. Simulations are conducted using the discrete event simulator OMNET++. We refer to the characterictics of a Medusa II sensor for the energy consumption and the computation time. In comparison with two other existing methods, our approach is able to increase the WSN lifetime and provides improved coverage performances. } + %\onecolumn @@ -86,15 +75,15 @@ challenges in WSNs, which has been addressed by a large amount of literature during the last few years, is the design of energy efficient approaches for coverage and connectivity~\cite{conti2014mobile}. Coverage reflects how well a sensor field is monitored. On the one hand we want to monitor the area of -interest in the most efficient way~\cite{Nayak04}, \textcolor{blue}{which means - that we want to maintain the best coverage as long as possible}. On the other +interest in the most efficient way~\cite{Nayak04}, which means + that we want to maintain the best coverage as long as possible. On the other hand we want to use as little energy as possible. Sensor nodes are battery-powered with no means of recharging or replacing, usually due to environmental (hostile or unpractical environments) or cost reasons. Therefore, it is desired that the WSNs are deployed with high densities so as to exploit the overlapping sensing regions of some sensor nodes to save energy by turning off some of them during the sensing phase to prolong the network -lifetime. \textcolor{blue}{A WSN can use various types of sensors such as +lifetime. A WSN can use various types of sensors such as \cite{ref17,ref19}: thermal, seismic, magnetic, visual, infrared, acoustic, and radar. These sensors are capable of observing different physical conditions such as: temperature, humidity, pressure, speed, direction, @@ -102,7 +91,7 @@ lifetime. \textcolor{blue}{A WSN can use various types of sensors such as kinds of objects, and mechanical stress levels on attached objects. Consequently, there is a wide range of WSN applications such as~\cite{ref22}: health-care, environment, agriculture, public safety, military, transportation - systems, and industry applications.} + systems, and industry applications. In this paper we design a protocol that focuses on the area coverage problem with the objective of maximizing the network lifetime. Our proposition, the @@ -127,13 +116,13 @@ framework of the DiLCO approach and the coverage problem formulation. In this paper we made more realistic simulations by taking into account the characteristics of a Medusa II sensor ~\cite{raghunathan2002energy} to measure the energy consumption and the computation time. We have implemented two other -existing \textcolor{blue}{and distributed approaches} (DESK ~\cite{ChinhVu}, and +existing and distributed approaches (DESK ~\cite{ChinhVu}, and GAF ~\cite{xu2001geography}) in order to compare their performances with our -approach. \textcolor{blue}{We focus on DESK and GAF protocols for two reasons. +approach. We focused on DESK and GAF protocols for two reasons. First our protocol is inspired by both of them: DiLCO uses a regular division of the area of interest as in GAF and a temporal division in rounds as in DESK. Second, DESK and GAF are well-known protocols, easy to implement, and - often used as references for comparison}. We also focus on performance + often used as references for comparison. We also focus on performance analysis based on the number of subregions. % MODIF - END @@ -174,7 +163,7 @@ and the set of active sensor nodes is decided at the beginning of each period requirements (e.g. area monitoring, connectivity, power efficiency). For instance, Jaggi et al. \cite{jaggi2006} address the problem of maximizing network lifetime by dividing sensors into the maximum number of disjoint subsets -such that each subset can ensure both coverage and connectivity. A greedy +so that each subset can ensure both coverage and connectivity. A greedy algorithm is applied once to solve this problem and the computed sets are activated in succession to achieve the desired network lifetime. Vu \cite{chin2007}, Padmatvathy et al. \cite{pc10}, propose algorithms working in a @@ -201,13 +190,13 @@ of information can be huge. {\it In order to be suitable for large-scale selecting the active sensors for the current period.} % MODIF - BEGIN -\textcolor{blue}{ Our approach to select the leader node in a subregion is quite + Our approach to select the leader node in a subregion is quite different from cluster head selection methods used in LEACH \cite{DBLP:conf/hicss/HeinzelmanCB00} or its variants \cite{ijcses11}. Contrary to LEACH, the division of the area of interest is supposed to be performed before the leader election. Moreover, we assume that the sensors are deployed almost uniformly and with high density over the area - of interest, such that the division is fixed and regular. As in LEACH, our + of interest, so that the division is fixed and regular. As in LEACH, our protocol works in round fashion. In each round, during the pre-sensing phase, nodes make autonomous decisions. In LEACH, each sensor elects itself to be a cluster head, and each non-cluster head will determine its cluster for the @@ -216,7 +205,7 @@ of information can be huge. {\it In order to be suitable for large-scale account to promote the nodes that have the most energy to become leader. Contrary to the LEACH protocol where all sensors will be active during the sensing-phase, our protocol allows to deactivate a subset of sensors through - an optimization process which reduces significantly the energy consumption.} + an optimization process which significantly reduces the energy consumption. % MODIF - END A large variety of coverage scheduling algorithms has been developed. Many of @@ -277,9 +266,9 @@ less accurate according to the number of primary points. \label{main_idea} \noindent We start by applying a divide-and-conquer algorithm to partition the area of interest into smaller areas called subregions and then our protocol is -executed simultaneously in each subregion. \textcolor{blue}{Sensor nodes are +executed simultaneously in each subregion. Sensor nodes are assumed to be deployed almost uniformly over the region and the subdivision of - the area of interest is regular.} + the area of interest is regular. \begin{figure}[ht!] \centering @@ -328,20 +317,20 @@ and each sensor node will have five possible status in the network: An outline of the protocol implementation is given by Algorithm~\ref{alg:DiLCO} which describes the execution of a period by a node (denoted by $s_j$ for a sensor node indexed by $j$). At the beginning a node checks whether it has -enough energy \textcolor{blue}{(its energy should be greater than a fixed - treshold $E_{th}$)} to stay active during the next sensing phase. If yes, it +enough energy (its energy should be greater than a fixed + treshold $E_{th}$) to stay active during the next sensing phase. If yes, it exchanges information with all the other nodes belonging to the same subregion: it collects from each node its position coordinates, remaining energy ($RE_j$), -ID, and the number of one-hop neighbors still alive. \textcolor{blue}{INFO - packet contains two parts: header and data payload. The sensor ID is included +ID, and the number of one-hop neighbors still alive. INFO + packet contains two parts: header and payload data. The sensor ID is included in the header, where the header size is 8 bits. The data part includes position coordinates (64 bits), remaining energy (32 bits), and the number of one-hop live neighbors (8 bits). Therefore the size of the INFO packet is 112 - bits.} Once the first phase is completed, the nodes of a subregion choose a + bits. Once the first phase is completed, the nodes of a subregion choose a leader to take the decision based on the following criteria with decreasing importance: larger number of neighbors, larger remaining energy, and then in case of equality, larger index. After that, if the sensor node is leader, it -will solve an integer program (see Section~\ref{cp}). \textcolor{blue}{This +will solve an integer program (see Section~\ref{cp}). This integer program contains boolean variables $X_j$ where ($X_j=1$) means that sensor $j$ will be active in the next sensing phase. Only sensors with enough remaining energy are involved in the integer program ($J$ is the set of all @@ -353,7 +342,7 @@ will solve an integer program (see Section~\ref{cp}). \textcolor{blue}{This send an ActiveSleep packet to each sensor in the same subregion to indicate it if it has to be active or not. Otherwise, if the sensor is not the leader, it will wait for the ActiveSleep packet to know its state for the coming sensing - phase.} + phase. %which provides a set of sensors planned to be %active in the next sensing phase. @@ -447,11 +436,11 @@ X_{j} \in \{0,1\}, &\forall j \in J \end{array} \right. \end{equation} -The objective function is a weighted sum of overcoverage and undercoverage. The goal is to limit the overcoverage in order to activate a minimal number of sensors while simultaneously preventing undercoverage. \textcolor{blue}{ By +The objective function is a weighted sum of overcoverage and undercoverage. The goal is to limit the overcoverage in order to activate a minimal number of sensors while simultaneously preventing undercoverage. By choosing $w_{U}$ much larger than $w_{\theta}$, the coverage of a maximum of primary points is ensured. Then for the same number of covered primary points, the solution with a minimal number of active sensors is - preferred. } + preferred. %Both weights $w_\theta$ and $w_U$ must be carefully chosen in %order to guarantee that the maximum number of points are covered during each %period. diff --git a/reponse.tex b/reponse.tex index 9b38abb..2c33ca6 100644 --- a/reponse.tex +++ b/reponse.tex @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ \vspace{-0.5cm}\hspace{-2cm}FEMTO-ST Institute, UMR 6714 CNRS -\hspace{-2cm}University Bourgogne Franche-Comt\'e +\hspace{-2cm}University of Bourgogne Franche-Comte \hspace{-2cm}IUT Belfort-Montb\'eliard, BP 527, 90016 Belfort Cedex, France. @@ -81,62 +81,106 @@ The paper present a new system to optimize sensord detections. The work present This work proposed a distributed lifetime coverage optimization (DiLCO) protocol to apply to predefined subregions, which are generated from the area of interest using a classical divide-and-conquer method, to improve the lifetime of a wireless sensor network. Their proposed protocol is devised with a two-step process, including a leader election technique in each subregion and a sensor's activity scheduling by each elected leader. In general, it is a good idea to pre-divide the network domain into several sub-areas, and assign a single cluster head in each sub-area for achieving more balanced energy dissipation for the wireless sensor network. As we known, Heinzelman et al. (2000) first proposed a clustering protocol called LEACH for periodical data-gathering applications. Also many variants of LEACH protocol or a variety of distributed protocols had proposed enhanced energy efficient adaptive clustering protocols by pre-dividing the network domain into several sub-areas, and assigning a single cluster head in each sub-area to achieve more balanced energy dissipation. Hence, I suggest that the authors could clearly state the differences and benefits between their leader selection technique and the methods of cluster head election in LEACH or other distributed protocols. Moreover, they used the two protocols, DESK and GAF, for assessing the performance of their protocols is not convincing. The authors may include more well-known or recently developed protocols for comparison. \textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} -%The difference between our leader selection technique and the methods of cluster head election in LEACH or other distributed protocols in that our approach assumes that the sensors are deployed almost uniformly and with high density over the region. So we only need to fix a regular division of the region into subregions to make the problem tractable. The subdivision is made using divide-and-conquer concept such that the number of hops between any pairs of sensors inside a subregion is less than or equal to~3. The sensors inside each subregion cooperate to elect one leader. Leader applies sensor activity scheduling based optimization to provide the schedule to the sensor nodes in the subregion. The advantage of our approach is to minimize the energy consumption required for communication. The sensors only require to communicate with the other sensors inside the subregion to elect the leader instead of communicating with other nodes in the WSN. \\Whereas in LEACH and other cluster head election methods, the cluster heads are elected in distributed way where sensors elect themselves to be local cluster-heads at any given time with a certain probability. These cluster-head nodes broadcast their status to the other sensors in the network. Each sensor node determines to which cluster it wants to belong by choosing the cluster-head that requires the minimum communication energy. Once all the nodes are organized into clusters, each cluster-head creates a schedule for the nodes in its cluster. \\\\ - In our approach, the leader selection technique is quite different from the LEACH protocol or from its variants. Contrary to the LEACH protocol, the division of the area of interest into subregions is assumed to be performed before the head election. Moreover, we assume that sensors are deployed almost uniformly and with high density over the area of interest, such that the division is fixed and regular. As in LEACH, our protocol works in round fashion. In each round, during the pre-sensing phase, nodes make autonomous decisions. In LEACH, each sensor elects itself to be a cluster head, and each non-cluster head will determine its cluster for the round. In our protocol, nodes in the same subregion select their leader. In both protocols, the amount of remaining energy in each node is taken into account to promote the nodes that have the most energy to become leader. Contrary to the LEACH protocol where all sensors will be active during the sensing-phase, our protocol allows to deactivate a subset of sensors through an optimization process which reduces significantly the energy consumption.\\\\ +%The difference between our leader selection technique and the methods of cluster head election in LEACH or other distributed protocols in that our approach assumes that the sensors are deployed almost uniformly and with high density over the region. So we only need to fix a regular division of the region into subregions to make the problem tractable. The subdivision is made using divide-and-conquer concept so that the number of hops between any pairs of sensors inside a subregion is less than or equal to~3. The sensors inside each subregion cooperate to elect one leader. Leader applies sensor activity scheduling based optimization to provide the schedule to the sensor nodes in the subregion. The advantage of our approach is to minimize the energy consumption required for communication. The sensors only require to communicate with the other sensors inside the subregion to elect the leader instead of communicating with other nodes in the WSN. \\Whereas in LEACH and other cluster head election methods, the cluster heads are elected in distributed way where sensors elect themselves to be local cluster-heads at any given time with a certain probability. These cluster-head nodes broadcast their status to the other sensors in the network. Each sensor node determines to which cluster it wants to belong by choosing the cluster-head that requires the minimum communication energy. Once all the nodes are organized into clusters, each cluster-head creates a schedule for the nodes in its cluster. \\\\ + In our approach, the leader selection technique is quite different from the LEACH protocol or from its variants. Contrary to the LEACH protocol, the division of the area of interest into subregions is assumed to be performed before the head election. Moreover, we assume that sensors are deployed almost uniformly and with high density over the area of interest, so that the division is fixed and regular. As in LEACH, our protocol works in round fashion. In each round, during the pre-sensing phase, nodes make autonomous decisions. In LEACH, each sensor elects itself to be a cluster head, and each non-cluster head will determine its cluster for the round. In our protocol, nodes in the same subregion select their leader. In both protocols, the amount of remaining energy in each node is taken into account to promote the nodes that have the most energy to become leader. Contrary to the LEACH protocol where all sensors will be active during the sensing-phase, our protocol allows to deactivate a subset of sensors through an optimization process which significantly reduces the energy consumption.\\\\ As explained by the reviewer, there is a large variety of energy-efficient protocols for WSN. We focus on GAF and DESK protocols for two main reasons. First, our protocol is inspired by both of them. DiLCO uses a regular division of the area as in GAF protocol and a temporal division in rounds as in DESK. Second, GAF and DESK are well-known protocols, easy to implement, and often used as references for comparison.}} %\textcolor{red}{je ne sais pas si on ne devrait pas inclure une ref \`a LEACH dans la biblio, mais je ne sais pas trop comment l'introduire dans le papier...} %\textcolor{magenta}{Le premier paragraphe de ta r\'eponse me semble pas mal, juste pour situer notre protocole par rapport à LEACH. On pourrait le mettre dans la section~2 ?}\\\\ }} %In fact, GAF algorithm is chosen for comparison as a competitor because it is famous and easy to implement, as well as many authors referred to it in many publications. DESK algorithm is also selected as competitor in the comparison because it works into rounds fashion (network lifetime divided into rounds) similar to our approaches, as well as DESK is a full distributed coverage approach.}} \noindent The following improvements may be suggested to make it even better:\\ \noindent {\bf 1. What is the ``new idea" or contribution of this work?}\\ -\textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} The contribution of this work is to design a protocol that focuses on the area coverage problem with the objective of maximizing the network lifetime. Our proposition, the Distributed Lifetime Coverage Optimization (DiLCO) protocol, maintains the coverage and improves the lifetime in WSNs. Our protocol combines two energy efficient mechanisms: leader election and sensor activity scheduling based optimization to optimize the coverage and the network lifetime inside each subregion. We strengthen our simulations and made them more realistic by taking into account the characteristics of a Medusa II sensor (Raghunathan et al., 2002) to measure the energy consumption and the computation time. We have implemented two other existing distributed approaches: DESK (Vu et al., 2006) and GAF (Xu et al., 2001), in order to compare their performances with our approach. These two approaches are well-known and often considered as references in comparison studies.}}\\ +\textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} The contribution of this work is to design a protocol that focuses on the area coverage problem with the objective of maximizing the network lifetime. Our proposition, the Distributed Lifetime Coverage Optimization (DiLCO) protocol, maintains the coverage and improves the lifetime in WSNs. Our protocol combines two energy efficient mechanisms: leader election and sensor activity scheduling based optimization to optimize the coverage and the network lifetime inside each subregion. We strengthened our simulations and made them more realistic by taking into account the characteristics of a Medusa II sensor (Raghunathan et al., 2002) to measure the energy consumption and the computation time. We have implemented two other existing distributed approaches: DESK (Vu et al., 2006) and GAF (Xu et al., 2001), in order to compare their performances with our approach. These two approaches are well-known and often considered as references in comparison studies.}}\\ \noindent {\bf 2. There are many parameters (listed in Page~5) that must be predefined before the proposed method begins. The reviewer suggests that the all special characters and symbols should be described or defined in the text.}\\ \textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} All special characters and symbols have been carefully checked: they were always described and defined in the text, except for $E_{th}$ in Algorithm~1. So we added a description in subsection~3.2 before its use in the algorithm.}}\\ \noindent {\bf 3. From their simulations using the five versions: DiLCO-2, DiLCO-4, DiLCO-8, DiLCO-16, and DiLCO-32. The authors concluded that the more subregions enable the extension of the network lifetime. From their experimental simulations, the subdivision in 16 subregions seems to be the most relevant. However, I was wondering if this was possible to derive an expression for the real optimal number of subregions. In general, the optimal number of subregions depends on the size of sensor field and the location of base station.}\\ -\textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} In fact, as noticed by the reviewer, the optimal number of subregions depends on the area of interest size, sensing range of sensor, and the location of base station. The optimal number of subregions will be investigated in future.}}\\ +\textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} In fact, as noticed by the + reviewer, the optimal number of subregions depends on the area of + interest size, sensing range of sensor, and the location of base + station. The optimal number of subregions will be investigated in + future works.}}\\ \noindent {\bf 4. The authors should try to indicate which parameters are critical to performance, is there a significant parameter difference, $w_U$ and $w_\Theta$ in Eq. (4) for example, when the protocol is applied of different WSNs? }\\ -\textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} As mentioned in the paper, the integer program is based on the model proposed by F. Pedraza, A. L. Medaglia, and A. Garcia (``Efficient coverage algorithms for wireless sensor networks'') with some modifications. The originality of the model is to solve both objectives in a parallel fashion: maximizing the coverage and minimizing the overcoverage. Nevertheless the weights $w_\theta$ and $w_U$ must be properly chosen so as to guarantee that the maximum number of points which are covered during each round is maximum. By choosing $w_{U}$ much larger than $w_{\theta}$, the coverage of a maximum of primary points is ensured. Then for the same number of covered primary points, the solution with a minimal number of active sensors is preferred. It has been proved in the paper mentioned above that this guarantee is satisfied for a weighting constant $w_{U}$ greater than $\left|P\right|$ (when $w_{\theta}$ is fixed to 1).}}\\ +\textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} As mentioned in the paper, + the integer program is based on the model proposed by F. Pedraza, + A. L. Medaglia, and A. Garcia (``Efficient coverage algorithms for + wireless sensor networks'') with some modifications. The + originality of the model is to solve both objectives in a parallel + fashion: maximizing the coverage and minimizing the + overcoverage. Nevertheless the weights $w_\theta$ and $w_U$ must + be properly chosen so as to guarantee that the number of points + which are covered during each round is maximum. By choosing + $w_{U}$ much larger than $w_{\theta}$, the coverage of a maximum + of primary points is ensured. Then for the same number of covered + primary points, the solution with a minimal number of active + sensors is preferred. It has been proved in the paper mentioned + above that this guarantee is satisfied for a constant weighting $w_{U}$ greater than $\left|P\right|$ (when $w_{\theta}$ is fixed to 1).}}\\ \noindent {\bf 5. It is unclear whether the parameters of the other two protocols were optimized at all. If they were not, as I suspect, there is no way of knowing whether, indeed, the proposed protocol outperforms the other two on the simulations of WSNs reported in the paper. All experiments would have to be made replicable and the comparisons with other protocols should be fair and crystal clear.}\\ -\textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} The parameters of the other two protocols were optimized at all as well as we used the same energy consumption model of one of them with slight modification for ensuring fair comparison.}}\\ +\textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} The parameters of the other + two protocols were optimized using the same energy consumption + model as of one of the protocols only with slight modifications to + ensure a fair comparison.}}\\ \noindent {\bf 6. I think the authors have a not too bad work here in hands, but the resulting paper is lacking some of convincible originality.}\\ -\textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} To the best of our knowledge, no hybrid coverage optimization protocol (as our DiLCO protocol) that is globally distributed on the subregions and locally centralized using optimization has ever been proposed in the literature. DiLCO protocol is based on combination of two energy efficient mechanisms: leader election and sensor activity scheduling based optimization so as to optimize the coverage and the network lifetime in each subregion.}} +\textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} To the best of our + knowledge, no hybrid coverage optimization protocol (as our DiLCO + protocol) that is globally distributed on the subregions and + locally centralized using optimization has ever been proposed in + the literature. The DiLCO protocol is based on the combination of two energy efficient mechanisms: leader election and sensor activity scheduling based optimization so as to optimize the coverage and the network lifetime in each subregion.}} \section*{Response to Reviewer $\#$5 Comments} The paper addresses the problem of lifetime coverage in wireless sensor networks. The main issue here is the energy to maintain full coverage of the network while achieving sensing, communication, and computation tasks. The author suggest a new protocol, named DiLCO, aiming at solving the aforementioned objective using a discrete optimization approach. The focus of the paper is clear and the basic idea looks attractive. However, from my opinion, number of clarifications are needed in order for me to be able to validate the whole contribution of the authors. Some of them include: \noindent {\bf 1. The concept of efficiency is not clearly stated, is it the amount of energy used by the protocol or the time it takes to completion ? (line 52 of the introduction ``most efficient'')}\\ -\textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} The concept of efficiency refers to the ability of maintaining the best coverage as long as possible. As previously explained, the model with the appropriate weights ensures that a maximum number of points are covered by the set of still alive sensors. The efficiency is measured through the performance metrics ``coverage ratio'' and ``network lifetime''. Coverage ratio remains around 100\% as long as possible (as long as there are enough alive sensors to cover all primary points) and then decreases. Network Lifetime is defined as the time until the coverage ratio drops below a predefined threshold.}}\\ +\textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} The concept of efficiency + refers to the ability of maintaining the best coverage as long as + possible. As previously explained, the model with the appropriate + weights ensures that a maximum number of points are covered by the + set of still alive sensors. The efficiency is measured through the + performance metrics ``coverage ratio'' and ``network + lifetime''. The coverage ratio remains around 100\% as long as possible (as long as there are enough alive sensors to cover all primary points) and then decreases. Network Lifetime is defined as the time until the coverage ratio drops below a predefined threshold.}}\\ \noindent {\bf 2. The topology of the graph is not considered in the paper. Isn't it important ? In which class of graphs the author think they will perform better ? are there some disadvantageous topologies ?}\\ \textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} The study of the topology of the graph is out of the scope of our paper. We do not focus on specific patterns of sensors' deployment. We consider a highly dense network of sensors uniformly deployed in the area of interest. }}\\ %Uniform graph partition is used by subdividing the sensing field into smaller subgraphs (subregion) using divide-and-conquer concept. The subgraph consists of sensor nodes which are previously deployed over the sensing field uniformly with high density to ensure that any primary point on the sensing field is covered by at least one sensor node. The graph partition problem has gained importance due to its application for clustering. The topology of the graph has important impact on the protocol performance. Random graph has negative effect on our DiLCO protocol because we suppose that the sensing field is subdivided uniformly. }} \noindent {\bf 3. In line 42 of section 3, why do we need $R_c \geq 2R_s$ ? Isn't it sufficient to have $Rc > Rs$ ? What is the implication of a stronger hypothesis ? How realistic is it ? Again, this raised the question of the topology.}\\ -\textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} We assume that the communication range $R_c$ satisfies the condition $Rc \geq 2R_s$. In fact, Zhang and Hou (``Maintaining Sensing Coverage and Connectivity in Large Sensor Networks'', 2005) proved that if the transmission range fulfills the previous hypothesis, the complete coverage of a convex area implies connectivity among active nodes. In this paper, communication ranges and sensing ranges of real sensors are given. Usually, the communication range goes from several tens of meters up to several hundreds (typically between 30 and 300 meters) and the sensing range does not exceed 30m. In the case of MEDUSA II sensor node, communications are performed by a TR1000 RFM Radio transceiver, which has transmission power of 0.75~mW at maximum and an approximate transmission range of 20~m.}}\\ +\textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} We assume that the + communication range $R_c$ satisfies the condition $Rc \geq + 2R_s$. In fact, Zhang and Hou (``Maintaining Sensing Coverage and + Connectivity in Large Sensor Networks'', 2005) proved that if the + transmission range fulfills the previous hypothesis, the complete + coverage of a convex area implies connectivity among active + nodes. In this paper, communication ranges and sensing ranges of + real sensors are given. Usually, the communication range goes from + several tens of meters up to several hundreds (typically between + 30 and 300 meters) and the sensing range does not exceed 30 m. In the case of MEDUSA II sensor node, communications are performed by a TR1000 RFM Radio transceiver, which has transmission power of 0.75~mW at maximum and an approximate transmission range of 20~m.}}\\ \noindent {\bf 4. In line 63 of subsection~3.2, it is not clear why the periodic scheduling is in favor of a more robust network. Please, explain.}\\ -\textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer :} We explain it in subsection~3.2.: ``A periodic scheduling is interesting because it enhances the robustness of the network against node failures. First, a node that has not enough energy to complete a period, or which fails before the decision is taken, will be excluded from the scheduling process. Second, if a node fails later, whereas it was supposed to sense the region of interest, it will only affect the quality of the coverage until the definition of a new cover set in the next period.''}}\\ +\textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer :} We explain it in subsection~3.2.: ``A periodic scheduling is interesting because it enhances the robustness of the network against node failures. First, a node that has not enough energy to complete a period, or which fails before the decision is taken, will be excluded from the scheduling process. Then, if a node fails later, while it was supposed to sense the region of interest, it will only affect the quality of the coverage until the definition of a new cover set in the next period.''}}\\ \noindent {\bf 5. The next sentence mention ``enough energy to complete a period''. This is another point where the author could be more rigorous. Indeed, how accurate is the evaluation of the required energy for a period ?}\\ -\textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} The evaluation of the required energy to complete a period takes into account the energy consumed for information exchange with neigbors inside a subregion and the energy needed to stay active during the sensing period. In our case, the sensing period duration is equal to one hour but might be adapted dynamically according to the QoS requirements. Thus, the threshold value $E_{th}$, which has been fixed to 36~Joules, has been computed by multiplying the energy consumed in the active state (9.72 mW) by the time in second for one period (3600 seconds), and adding the energy for the pre-sensing phases. We explain that in subsection~5.1. In our simulation, the computation time required by a leader node to solve the integer program does not exceed 1000~seconds regardless the size of the network and the number of subregions (see Figure~4), except the case with two subregions (DiLCO-2) where the computation time becomes much too long as the network size increases. So the energy required for computation, $E^{comp}$, estimated to 26.83~mW per second, will never exceed 26.83~Joules. All sensors whose remaining energy is greater than $E_{th}=36$ Joules are potential leaders. Once a leader is selected, it will be itself included in the coverage problem formulation only if its remaining energy before computation is greater than $E_{th}+E^{comp}$. We added a sentence in subsection~3.2 before the description of the algorithm, to clarify this point. Recall that $E^{comp}>E_{th}$ makes no sense: in such a case, the energy required for the decision phase would be greater than the energy required for the sensing phase.}}\\ +\textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} The evaluation of the required energy to complete a period takes into account the energy consumed for information exchange with neigbors inside a subregion and the energy needed to stay active during the sensing period. In our case, the sensing period duration is equal to one hour but might be adapted dynamically according to the QoS requirements. Thus, the threshold value $E_{th}$, which has been fixed to 36~Joules, has been computed by multiplying the energy consumed in the active state (9.72 mW) by the time in second for one period (3,600 seconds), and adding the energy for the pre-sensing phases. We explain that in subsection~5.1. In our simulation, the computation time required by a leader node to solve the integer program does not exceed 1,000~seconds regardless the size of the network and the number of subregions (see Figure~4), except the case with two subregions (DiLCO-2) where the computation time becomes much too long as the network size increases. So the energy required for computation, $E^{comp}$, estimated at 26.83~mW per second, will never exceed 26.83~Joules. All sensors whose remaining energy is greater than $E_{th}=36$ Joules are potential leaders. Once a leader is selected, it will be itself included in the coverage problem formulation only if its remaining energy before computation is greater than $E_{th}+E^{comp}$. We added a sentence in subsection~3.2 before the description of the algorithm, to clarify this point. Recall that $E^{comp}>E_{th}$ makes no sense: in such a case, the energy required for the decision phase would be greater than the energy required for the sensing phase.}}\\ \noindent {\bf 6. About the information collected (line 36-38), what are they used for ?}\\ -\textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} These information are used for leader election and decision phases. Details on the INFO packet have been added at the end of subsection~3.2. After the information exchange among the sensor nodes in the subregion, each node will have all the information needed to decide if it will be the leader or not. The decision is based on selecting the sensor node that has the larger number of one-hop neighbors. If this value is the same for many sensors, the node that has the largest remaining energy will be selected as a leader. If there exists sensors with the same number of neighbors and the same value for the remaining energy, the sensor node that has the largest index will be finally selected as a leader.}}\\ +\textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} These information are used for leader election and decision phases. Details on the INFO packet have been added at the end of subsection~3.2. After the information exchange among the sensor nodes in the subregion, each node will have all the information needed to decide if it will be the leader or not. The decision is based on selecting the sensor node that has the larger number of one-hop neighbors. If this value is the same for many sensors, the node that has the largest remaining energy will be selected as a leader. If there are sensors with the same number of neighbors and the same value for the remaining energy, the sensor node that has the largest index will be finally selected as a leader.}}\\ \noindent {\bf 7. The way the leader is elected could emphasize first on the remaining energy. Is it sure that the remaining energy will be sufficient to solve the integer program algorithm ?}\\ -\textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} You are right. We have answered this question in previous comments. Remaining energy for DiLCO-4, DiLCO-8, DiLCO-16, and DiLCO-32 protocol versions will be sufficient to solve the integer program algorithm (see Figure 4: execution time in seconds) in so far as the computation does not exceed 1000~seconds. Therefore the energy required for computation $E^{comp}$, estimated to 26.83 mW per second, will never exceed 26.83 Joules. However only sensors able to be alive during one sensing period will be included in the coverage problem formulation. To sum up, a sensor may be elected as a leader only if its remaining energy is greater than $E^{comp}$, a leader may participate in the sensing phase only if its remaining energy is greater than $E_{th}+E^{comp}$. Recall that $E_{th}>E^{comp}$.}}\\ +\textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} You are right. We have + answered this question in previous comments. The remaining energy for DiLCO-4, DiLCO-8, DiLCO-16, and DiLCO-32 protocol versions will be sufficient to solve the integer program algorithm (see Figure 4: execution time in seconds) in so far as the computation does not exceed 1,000~seconds. Therefore the energy required to compute $E^{comp}$, estimated to 26.83 mW per second, will never exceed 26.83 Joules. However only sensors able to be alive during one sensing period will be included in the coverage problem formulation. To sum up, a sensor may be elected as a leader only if its remaining energy is greater than $E^{comp}$, a leader may participate in the sensing phase only if its remaining energy is greater than $E_{th}+E^{comp}$. Recall that $E_{th}>E^{comp}$.}}\\ \noindent {\bf 8. Regarding the MIP formulation at the end of section 4, the first constraint does not appear as a constraint for me as it is an invariant (as shown on top)}\\ -\textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} This constraint is essential to make the integer program consistent. Whithout this constraint, one optimal solution might be $\theta_p=0 \quad \forall p \in P$, and $U_p=0 \quad \forall p \in P$, whatever the values of $X_j$. And no real optimization is then performed.}} -\textcolor{red}{Je pense que sa remarque concerne la premiere contrainte sous {\it subject to}...}\\ +\textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} This constraint is essential to make the integer program consistent. Whithout this constraint, one optimal solution might be $\theta_p=0 \quad \forall p \in P$, and $U_p=0 \quad \forall p \in P$, whatever the values of $X_j$. And no real optimization is then performed.}}\\ + \noindent {\bf 9. How $w_\theta$ and $w_U$ are chosen ? (end of section 4). How dependent if the method toward these parameters ?}\\ -\textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} Both weights $w_\theta$ and $w_U$ must be carefully chosen in order to guarantee that the maximum number of points are covered during each period. In fact, $w_U$ should be large enough compared to $w_{\Theta}$ to prevent overcoverage and so to activate a minimum number of sensors. We discuss this point in our answer for question~4 of reviewer~3.}}\\ +\textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} Both weights $w_\theta$ and + $w_U$ must be carefully chosen in order to guarantee that the + maximum number of points are covered during each period. In fact, + $w_U$ should be large enough compared to $w_{\Theta}$ to prevent + overcoverage and thus to activate a minimum number of sensors. We discuss this point in our answer for question~4 of reviewer~3.}}\\ \noindent {\bf 10. In table 2, the ``listening" and the ``computation" status are both (ON, ON, ON), is that correct ?}\\ \textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} Yes, in both cases, sensors continue their processing, communication, and sensing tasks.}}\\ @@ -148,10 +192,16 @@ The paper addresses the problem of lifetime coverage in wireless sensor networks \textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} In fact, there is no duplication. The first one, denoted $E^{\scriptsize \mbox{com}}_m$, represents the energy consumption spent by all the nodes for wireless communications during period $m$. The second, $E^{\scriptsize \mbox{comp}}_m$, refers to the energy needed by all the leader nodes to solve the integer program during a period.}}\\ \noindent {\bf 13. Figure 2 should be discussed including the initial energy and the topology of the graph}\\ -\textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} Each node has an initial energy level, in Joules, which is randomly drawn in $[500-700]$. If its energy provision reaches a value below the threshold $E_{th}$ = 36~Joules, the minimum energy needed for a node to stay active during one period, it will no longer take part in the coverage task. As previously explained in answer 2, we consider a highly dense network of sensors uniformly deployed in the area of interest.}}\\ +\textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} Each node has an initial + energy level, in Joules, which is randomly drawn in + $[500-700]$. If its energy provision reaches a value below the + threshold $E_{th}$ = 36~Joules, the minimum energy needed for a + node to stay active during one period, it will no longer take part + in the coverage task. As explained previously in answer 2, we consider a highly dense network of sensors uniformly deployed in the area of interest.}}\\ \noindent {\bf 14. You mention a DELL laptop. How this could be assimilated to a sensor ?}\\ -\textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} In fact, simulations are performed on a laptop DELL. But to be consistent with the use of real sensors in practice, we multiply the execution times obtained with the DELL laptop by a constant. This is explained in subsection~5.2.3.}}\\ +\textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} In fact, simulations are + performed on a DELL laptop. But to be consistent with the use of real sensors in practice, we multiply the execution times obtained with the DELL laptop by a constant. This is explained in subsection~5.2.3.}}\\ \noindent {\bf 15. In Figure 4, what makes the execution times different ?}\\ \textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} The execution times are different according to the size of the integer problem to solve. The size of the problem depends on the number of variables and constraints. The number of variables is linked to the number of alive sensors $J$, and the number of primary points $P$. Thus the integer program contains $J$ variables of type $X_j$, $P$ overcoverage variables, and $P$ undercoverage variables. The number of constraints is equal to $P$.}}\\ @@ -160,7 +210,8 @@ The paper addresses the problem of lifetime coverage in wireless sensor networks \textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer:} It is important to mention a divide-and-conquer approach because the subdivision of the sensing field is based on this concept.}}\\ \noindent {\bf 17. The connectivity among subregion should be studied too.}\\ -\textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer :} Yes you are right, we will investigated it more precisely in future. Up to now, we make the assumption that the communication range $R_c$ satisfies the condition $Rc \geq 2R_s$. In fact, Zhang and Hou (``Maintaining Sensing Coverage and Connectivity in Large Sensor Networks", 2005) proved that if the transmission range fulfills the previous hypothesis, the complete coverage of a convex area implies connectivity among active nodes. Therefore, as long as the coverage ratio is greater than $95\%$, we can assume that the connectivity is maintained. We have checked this hypothesis by simulation with OMNET++.}}\\ +\textcolor{blue}{\textbf{\textsc{Answer :} Yes you are right, we will + investigate it more precisely in the future. At the moment, we make the assumption that the communication range $R_c$ satisfies the condition $Rc \geq 2R_s$. In fact, Zhang and Hou (``Maintaining Sensing Coverage and Connectivity in Large Sensor Networks", 2005) proved that if the transmission range fulfills the previous hypothesis, the complete coverage of a convex area implies connectivity among active nodes. Therefore, as long as the coverage ratio is greater than $95\%$, we can assume that the connectivity is maintained. We have checked this hypothesis by simulations with OMNET++.}}\\ We are very grateful to the reviewers who, by their recommendations, allowed us to improve the quality of our article. -- 2.39.5