Update remarks.

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@@ -25,10 +25,12 @@
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+\newcommand{\DL}[2][inline]{%
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+\newcommand{\RC}[2][inline]{%
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@@ -95,9 +97,8 @@ a residual precision up to \np{E-11}. Such successful results open
 perspectives on experimentations for running the algorithm on a 
 simulated large scale growing environment and with larger problem size. 
 
 perspectives on experimentations for running the algorithm on a 
 simulated large scale growing environment and with larger problem size. 
 

-Keywords : Algorithm distributed iterative asynchronous simulation 
-simgrid
-
+% no keywords for IEEE conferences
+% Keywords: Algorithm distributed iterative asynchronous simulation simgrid

 \end{abstract}
 
 \section{Introduction}
 \end{abstract}
 
 \section{Introduction}


@@ -170,16 +171,11 @@ our future work after the results.
  
 \section{The asynchronous iteration model}
 
  
 \section{The asynchronous iteration model}
 

-Décrire le modèle asynchrone. Je m'en charge (DL)
+\DL{Décrire le modèle asynchrone. Je m'en charge}

 
 \section{SimGrid}
 
 
 \section{SimGrid}
 

-Décrire SimGrid~\cite{casanova+legrand+quinson.2008.simgrid} (Arnaud)
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+\AG{Décrire SimGrid~\cite{casanova+legrand+quinson.2008.simgrid} (Arnaud)}

 
 
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@@ -332,7 +328,10 @@ lat latency, \dots{}).
   \centering
   \caption{2 clusters X 50 nodes}
   \label{tab.cluster.2x50}
   \centering
   \caption{2 clusters X 50 nodes}
   \label{tab.cluster.2x50}

-  \AG{Les images manquent dans le dépôt Git. Si ce sont vraiment des tableaux, utiliser un format vectoriel (eps ou pdf), et surtout pas de jpeg!}
+  \AG{Ces tableaux (\ref{tab.cluster.2x50}, \ref{tab.cluster.3x33} et
+    \ref{tab.cluster.3x67}) sont affreux. Utiliser un format vectoriel (eps ou
+    pdf) ou, mieux, les réécrire en \LaTeX{}. Réécrire les légendes proprement
+    également (\texttt{\textbackslash{}times} au lieu de \texttt{X} par ex.)}

   \includegraphics[width=209pt]{img1.jpg}
 \end{table}
 
   \includegraphics[width=209pt]{img1.jpg}
 \end{table}
 


@@ -340,7 +339,7 @@ lat latency, \dots{}).
   \centering
   \caption{3 clusters X 33 nodes}
   \label{tab.cluster.3x33}
   \centering
   \caption{3 clusters X 33 nodes}
   \label{tab.cluster.3x33}

-  \AG{Le fichier manque.}
+  \AG{Refaire le tableau.}

   \includegraphics[width=209pt]{img2.jpg}
 \end{table}
 
   \includegraphics[width=209pt]{img2.jpg}
 \end{table}
 


@@ -348,7 +347,7 @@ lat latency, \dots{}).
   \centering
   \caption{3 clusters X 67 nodes}
   \label{tab.cluster.3x67}
   \centering
   \caption{3 clusters X 67 nodes}
   \label{tab.cluster.3x67}

-  \AG{Le fichier manque.}
+  \AG{Refaire le tableau.}

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 \end{table}