X-Git-Url: https://bilbo.iut-bm.univ-fcomte.fr/and/gitweb/hpcc2014.git/blobdiff_plain/61bc201b5e21425f4674bd8d8e015cceb1a0ca3a..HEAD:/hpcc2014_reviews.txt?ds=sidebyside diff --git a/hpcc2014_reviews.txt b/hpcc2014_reviews.txt index 64968a5..2c5393a 100644 --- a/hpcc2014_reviews.txt +++ b/hpcc2014_reviews.txt @@ -201,18 +201,18 @@ AUTHORS: Charles Emile Ramamonjisoa, David Laiymani, Arnaud Giersch, ,---- | Some knitpicks include: -| - Abstract: "Behaviours", please no plural -| - Sec II (and others): "As exposed" --> "As described" -| - Sec II: "And important idle times" --> better "useless idle times -| used for synchronization" -| - Sec III: "by the mean of an XML file" --> "by means of an XML file". -| - SEC IV.B: did not encouter ... unless some code debugging" --> -| please rewrite the unless part... -| - SEC V: "Hosts processors power" --> "Host processor power" +| [x] Abstract: "Behaviours", please no plural +| [x] Sec II (and others): "As exposed" --> "As described" +| [ ] Sec II: "And important idle times" --> better "useless idle times +| used for synchronization" +| [x] Sec III: "by the mean of an XML file" --> "by means of an XML file". +| [ ] SEC IV.B: did not encouter ... unless some code debugging" --> +| please rewrite the unless part... +| [x] SEC V: "Hosts processors power" --> "Host processor power" `---- [RCE] On va prendre en compte ces remarques. - [AG] J'ai commencé pour les plus faciles. + [AG] J'ai commencé pour les plus faciles (cochées dans la liste ci-dessus). ----------------------- REVIEW 3 --------------------- @@ -256,7 +256,9 @@ AUTHORS: Charles Emile Ramamonjisoa, David Laiymani, Arnaud Giersch, `---- [RCE] ?? - +[RC] En gros il nous critique car on a pris un problème trop simple. + On le sait, mais on fait de l'asynchrone. Donc on ne répondra pas à + cette remarque. ,---- | 3) This is somewhat of a minor point, but I did not see an explicit @@ -281,6 +283,7 @@ AUTHORS: Charles Emile Ramamonjisoa, David Laiymani, Arnaud Giersch, convergé: (k==MaxIter)or(X^k−X^k+1)<=epsilon, X sous-vecteur local de la solution et epsilon est la outer precision et donc la précision donnée dans la table I. +[RC] J'ai ajouté un truc là dessus, section IV A ,---- | 4) Typical latencies within clusters are on the order of a