X-Git-Url: https://bilbo.iut-bm.univ-fcomte.fr/and/gitweb/hpcc2014.git/blobdiff_plain/acebcc8c2f720f17abbadbc617d5881ac85551db..5594049b118b846213874268dd23ac82b6a0adf8:/hpcc2014_reviews.txt?ds=sidebyside diff --git a/hpcc2014_reviews.txt b/hpcc2014_reviews.txt index 64968a5..ff8faf8 100644 --- a/hpcc2014_reviews.txt +++ b/hpcc2014_reviews.txt @@ -201,18 +201,18 @@ AUTHORS: Charles Emile Ramamonjisoa, David Laiymani, Arnaud Giersch, ,---- | Some knitpicks include: -| - Abstract: "Behaviours", please no plural -| - Sec II (and others): "As exposed" --> "As described" -| - Sec II: "And important idle times" --> better "useless idle times -| used for synchronization" -| - Sec III: "by the mean of an XML file" --> "by means of an XML file". -| - SEC IV.B: did not encouter ... unless some code debugging" --> -| please rewrite the unless part... -| - SEC V: "Hosts processors power" --> "Host processor power" +| [x] Abstract: "Behaviours", please no plural +| [x] Sec II (and others): "As exposed" --> "As described" +| [ ] Sec II: "And important idle times" --> better "useless idle times +| used for synchronization" +| [x] Sec III: "by the mean of an XML file" --> "by means of an XML file". +| [ ] SEC IV.B: did not encouter ... unless some code debugging" --> +| please rewrite the unless part... +| [x] SEC V: "Hosts processors power" --> "Host processor power" `---- [RCE] On va prendre en compte ces remarques. - [AG] J'ai commencé pour les plus faciles. + [AG] J'ai commencé pour les plus faciles (cochées dans la liste ci-dessus). ----------------------- REVIEW 3 ---------------------