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@@ -407,7 +407,7 @@ values for each node (static and dynamic powers). However, the most important
 energy reduction gain can be achieved when the energy curve has a convex form as shown 
 in~\cite{Zhuo_Energy.efficient.Dynamic.Task.Scheduling,Rauber_Analytical.Modeling.for.Energy,Hao_Learning.based.DVFS}.
 
 energy reduction gain can be achieved when the energy curve has a convex form as shown 
 in~\cite{Zhuo_Energy.efficient.Dynamic.Task.Scheduling,Rauber_Analytical.Modeling.for.Energy,Hao_Learning.based.DVFS}.
 

-\section{The scaling factors selection algorithm for heterogeneous grid platforms }
+\section{The scaling factors selection algorithm for  grids }

 \label{sec.optim}
 
 \begin{algorithm}
 \label{sec.optim}
 
 \begin{algorithm}


@@ -479,10 +479,11 @@ in~\cite{Zhuo_Energy.efficient.Dynamic.Task.Scheduling,Rauber_Analytical.Modelin
 \subsection{The algorithm details}
 
 \textcolor{red}{Delete the subsection if there's only one.}
 \subsection{The algorithm details}
 
 \textcolor{red}{Delete the subsection if there's only one.}

-In this section, Algorithm~\ref{HSA} is presented. It selects the frequency
-scaling factors vector that gives the best trade-off between minimizing the
+
+In this section, the scaling factors selection algorithm for  grids, algorithm~\ref{HSA}, is presented. It selects the vector of the frequency
+scaling factors  that gives the best trade-off between minimizing the

 energy consumption and maximizing the performance of a message passing
 energy consumption and maximizing the performance of a message passing

-synchronous iterative application executed on a heterogeneous grid platform. It works
+synchronous iterative application executed on a  grid. It works

 online during the execution time of the iterative message passing program.  It
 uses information gathered during the first iteration such as the computation
 time and the communication time in one iteration for each node. The algorithm is
 online during the execution time of the iterative message passing program.  It
 uses information gathered during the first iteration such as the computation
 time and the communication time in one iteration for each node. The algorithm is


@@ -500,13 +501,13 @@ scaling algorithm is called in the iterative MPI program.
   \label{fig:st_freq}
 \end{figure}
 
   \label{fig:st_freq}
 \end{figure}
 

-The nodes in a heterogeneous grid have different computing powers, thus
+Nodes from distinct clusters in a grid have different computing powers, thus

 while executing message passing iterative synchronous applications, fast nodes
 have to wait for the slower ones to finish their computations before being able
 to synchronously communicate with them as in Figure~\ref{fig:heter}.  These
 periods are called idle or slack times.  The algorithm takes into account this
 while executing message passing iterative synchronous applications, fast nodes
 have to wait for the slower ones to finish their computations before being able
 to synchronously communicate with them as in Figure~\ref{fig:heter}.  These
 periods are called idle or slack times.  The algorithm takes into account this

-problem and tries to reduce these slack times when selecting the frequency
-scaling factors vector. At first, it selects initial frequency scaling factors
+problem and tries to reduce these slack times when selecting the vector of the frequency
+scaling factors. At first, it selects initial frequency scaling factors

 that increase the execution times of fast nodes and minimize the differences
 between the computation times of fast and slow nodes. The value of the initial
 frequency scaling factor for each node is inversely proportional to its
 that increase the execution times of fast nodes and minimize the differences
 between the computation times of fast and slow nodes. The value of the initial
 frequency scaling factor for each node is inversely proportional to its


@@ -527,25 +528,24 @@ follows:
 \end{equation}
 If the computed initial frequency for a node is not available in the gears of
 that node, it is replaced by the nearest available frequency.  In
 \end{equation}
 If the computed initial frequency for a node is not available in the gears of
 that node, it is replaced by the nearest available frequency.  In

-Figure~\ref{fig:st_freq}, the nodes are sorted by their computing power in
+Figure~\ref{fig:st_freq}, the nodes are sorted by their computing powers in

 ascending order and the frequencies of the faster nodes are scaled down
 according to the computed initial frequency scaling factors.  The resulting new
 frequencies are highlighted in Figure~\ref{fig:st_freq}.  This set of
 frequencies can be considered as a higher bound for the search space of the
 ascending order and the frequencies of the faster nodes are scaled down
 according to the computed initial frequency scaling factors.  The resulting new
 frequencies are highlighted in Figure~\ref{fig:st_freq}.  This set of
 frequencies can be considered as a higher bound for the search space of the

-optimal vector of frequencies because selecting scaling factors higher
+optimal vector of frequencies because selecting higher frequencies

 than the higher bound will not improve the performance of the application and it
 will increase its overall energy consumption.  Therefore the algorithm that
 selects the frequency scaling factors starts the search method from these
 initial frequencies and takes a downward search direction toward lower
 than the higher bound will not improve the performance of the application and it
 will increase its overall energy consumption.  Therefore the algorithm that
 selects the frequency scaling factors starts the search method from these
 initial frequencies and takes a downward search direction toward lower

-frequencies or reaching to the lower bound. The lower bound is used to  stop 
-the algorithm search process when the new computed distance between the energy and performance is less than zero.
-The new negative distance is  mean that the performance degradation ratio is higher than energy saving ratio.
-Therefore, the algorithm must stop the iterations before reaching to the end of the search space, the minimum frequencies, 
-because the all the coming new distances are negative values.
-The algorithm iterates on all remaining frequencies, from the higher
-bound until all nodes reach their minimum frequencies or to the lower bound, to compute their overall
-energy consumption and performance, and select the optimal frequency scaling
-factors vector. At each iteration the algorithm determines the slowest node
+frequencies until reaching the nodes' minimum frequencies or lower bounds. A node's frequency is considered its lower bound if the computed distance between the energy and performance at this frequency is less than zero.
+A negative distance means that the performance degradation ratio is higher than the energy saving ratio.
+In this situation, the algorithm must stop the downward search because it has reached the lower bound and it is useless to test the lower frequencies. Indeed, they will all give worse distances. 
+
+Therefore, the algorithm iterates on all remaining frequencies, from the higher
+bound until all nodes reach their minimum frequencies or their lower bounds, to compute the overall
+energy consumption and performance and selects the optimal vector of the frequency scaling
+factors. At each iteration the algorithm determines the slowest node

 according to the equation (\ref{eq:perf}) and keeps its frequency unchanged,
 while it lowers the frequency of all other nodes by one gear.  The new overall
 energy consumption and execution time are computed according to the new scaling
 according to the equation (\ref{eq:perf}) and keeps its frequency unchanged,
 while it lowers the frequency of all other nodes by one gear.  The new overall
 energy consumption and execution time are computed according to the new scaling


@@ -553,18 +553,17 @@ factors.  The optimal set of frequency scaling factors is the set that gives the
 highest distance according to the objective function (\ref{eq:max}).
 
 Figures~\ref{fig:r1} and \ref{fig:r2} illustrate the normalized performance and
 highest distance according to the objective function (\ref{eq:max}).
 
 Figures~\ref{fig:r1} and \ref{fig:r2} illustrate the normalized performance and

-consumed energy for an application running on a homogeneous platform and a
-heterogeneous grid platform respectively while increasing the scaling factors. It can
-be noticed that in a homogeneous platform the search for the optimal scaling
+consumed energy for an application running on a homogeneous cluster and a
+ grid platform respectively while increasing the scaling factors. It can
+be noticed that in a homogeneous cluster the search for the optimal scaling

 factor should start from the maximum frequency because the performance and the
 consumed energy decrease from the beginning of the plot. On the other hand, in
 factor should start from the maximum frequency because the performance and the
 consumed energy decrease from the beginning of the plot. On the other hand, in

-the heterogeneous grid platform the performance is maintained at the beginning of the
+the  grid platform the performance is maintained at the beginning of the

 plot even if the frequencies of the faster nodes decrease until the computing
 power of scaled down nodes are lower than the slowest node. In other words,
 until they reach the higher bound. It can also be noticed that the higher the
 difference between the faster nodes and the slower nodes is, the bigger the
 plot even if the frequencies of the faster nodes decrease until the computing
 power of scaled down nodes are lower than the slowest node. In other words,
 until they reach the higher bound. It can also be noticed that the higher the
 difference between the faster nodes and the slower nodes is, the bigger the

-maximum distance between the energy curve and the performance curve is while the
-scaling factors are varying which results in bigger energy savings. 
+maximum distance between the energy curve and the performance curve is, which results in bigger energy savings. 

 
 
 \section{Experimental results}
 
 
 \section{Experimental results}