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@@ -407,10 +407,10 @@ in which  several clusters are  geographically distant,  so there are  intra and
 inter-cluster communications. In the following, these parameters are described:
 
 \begin{itemize}
-	\item hostfile: hosts description file.
+	\item hostfile: hosts description file,
 	\item platform: file describing the platform architecture: clusters (CPU power,
 \dots{}), intra cluster network description, inter cluster network (bandwidth $bw$,
-latency $lat$, \dots{}).
+latency $lat$, \dots{}),
 	\item archi   : grid computational description (number of clusters, number of
 nodes/processors in each cluster).
 \end{itemize}
@@ -485,7 +485,7 @@ results comparison and analysis. In the scope of this study, we retain
 on the  one hand the algorithm execution mode (synchronous and asynchronous)
 and on the other hand the execution time and the number of iterations to reach the convergence. \\
 
-\textbf{Step 4  }: Set up the  different grid testbed environments  that will be
+\textbf{Step 4}: Set up the  different grid testbed environments  that will be
 simulated in the  simulator tool to run the program.  The following architectures
 have been configured in SimGrid : 2$\times$16, 4$\times$8, 4$\times$16, 8$\times$8 and 2$\times$50. The first number
 represents the number  of clusters in the grid and  the second number represents
@@ -494,8 +494,8 @@ designed to  operate with a bandwidth  equals to 10Gbits (resp.  1Gbits/s) and a
 latency of 8.10$^{-6}$ seconds (resp.  5.10$^{-5}$) for the intra-clusters links
 (resp.  inter-clusters backbone links).  \\
 
-\LZK{Il me semble que le bw et lat des deux réseaux varient dans les expés d'une simu à l'autre. On vire la dernière phrase?}
-\RC{il me semble qu'on peut laisser ca}
+%\LZK{Il me semble que le bw et lat des deux réseaux varient dans les expés d'une simu à l'autre. On vire la dernière phrase?}
+%\RC{il me semble qu'on peut laisser ca}
 
 \textbf{Step 5}: Conduct an extensive and comprehensive testings
 within these configurations by varying the key parameters, especially
@@ -644,9 +644,9 @@ the  network speed  drops down (variation of 12.5\%), the  difference between  t
 \begin{figure} [htbp]
 \centering
 \includegraphics[width=100mm]{cluster_x_nodes_n1_x_n2.pdf}
-\caption{Various grid configurations with networks N1 vs N2
-\AG{\np{8E-6}, \np{5E-6} au lieu de 8E-6, 5E-6}}
-\RCE{Corrige}
+\caption{Various grid configurations with networks N1 vs N2}
+%\AG{\np{8E-6}, \np{5E-6} au lieu de 8E-6, 5E-6}}
+%\RCE{Corrige}
 \label{fig:02}
 \end{figure}
 %\end{wrapfigure}
@@ -670,18 +670,19 @@ the  network speed  drops down (variation of 12.5\%), the  difference between  t
 \begin{figure} [htbp]
 \centering
 \includegraphics[width=100mm]{network_latency_impact_on_execution_time.pdf}
-\caption{Network latency impacts on execution time
-\AG{\np{E-6}}}
+\caption{Network latency impacts on execution time}
+%\AG{\np{E-6}}}
 \label{fig:03}
 \end{figure}
 
-According to  the results of  Figure~\ref{fig:03}, a degradation of  the network
-latency from  $8.10^{-6}$ to  $6.10^{-5}$ implies an  absolute time  increase of
-more  than $75\%$  (resp.  $82\%$)  of the  execution  for  the classical  GMRES
-(resp.  Krylov multisplitting)  algorithm which means that the GMRES seems tolerate more the network latency variation with a less  rate increase  of  the  execution time. However, the execution time factor between the two algorithms varies from 2.2 to 1.5 times with a network latency decreasing from $8.10^{-6}$ to  $6.10^{-5}$.
+In Table~\ref{tab:03}, parameters  for the influence of the  network latency are
+reported.  According to the results of Figure~\ref{fig:03}, a degradation of the
+network  latency  from  $8.10^{-6}$  to $6.10^{-5}$  implies  an  absolute  time
+increase of more than $75\%$ (resp.   $82\%$) of the execution for the classical
+GMRES  (resp.   Krylov  multisplitting)  algorithm. The  execution  time  factor
+between the two algorithms  varies from 2.2 to 1.5 times  with a network latency
+decreasing from $8.10^{-6}$ to $6.10^{-5}$.
 
-\RC{Les  2  précédentes phrases  me  semblent en contradiction....}  
-\RCE{Reformule}
 
 \subsubsection{Network bandwidth impacts on performance}
 \ \\
@@ -694,8 +695,9 @@ more  than $75\%$  (resp.  $82\%$)  of the  execution  for  the classical  GMRES
                           & $lat$= 5.10$^{-5}$ second \\
  Input matrix size & $N_{x} \times N_{y} \times N_{z} =150 \times 150 \times 150$\\ \hline \\
  \end{tabular}
-\caption{Test conditions: Network bandwidth impacts\RC{Qu'est ce qui varie ici? Il n'y a pas de variation dans le tableau}}
-\RCE{C est le bw}
+\caption{Test conditions: Network bandwidth impacts}
+%  \RC{Qu'est ce qui varie ici? Il n'y a pas de variation dans le tableau}
+%\RCE{C est le bw}
 \label{tab:04}
 \end{table}