From d4ade70c19ff4980df5662db589ac0defced4391 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Arnaud Giersch <arnaud.giersch@univ-fcomte.fr>
Date: Thu, 7 May 2015 15:25:58 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Some remarks.

---
 paper.tex | 22 ++++++++++++++++------
 1 file changed, 16 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/paper.tex b/paper.tex
index 0b7dc1d..c8b8918 100644
--- a/paper.tex
+++ b/paper.tex
@@ -522,7 +522,8 @@ architectures and scaling up the input matrix size}
  Input matrix size & N$_{x}$ x N$_{y}$ x N$_{z}$ =150 x 150 x 150\\ %\hline
  - &  N$_{x}$ x N$_{y}$ x N$_{z}$  =170 x 170 x 170    \\ \hline
  \end{tabular}
-\caption{Test conditions: various grid configurations with the input matix size N$_{x}$=150 or N$_{x}$=170 \RC{N2 n'est pas défini..}\RC{Nx est défini, Ny? Nz?}}
+\caption{Test conditions: various grid configurations with the input matix size N$_{x}$=150 or N$_{x}$=170 \RC{N2 n'est pas défini..}\RC{Nx est défini, Ny? Nz?}
+\AG{La lettre 'x' n'est pas le symbole de la multiplication. Utiliser \texttt{\textbackslash times}.  Idem dans le texte, les figures, etc.}}
 \label{tab:01}
 \end{center}
 \end{table}
@@ -545,7 +546,8 @@ multisplitting method.
   \begin{center}
     \includegraphics[width=100mm]{cluster_x_nodes_nx_150_and_nx_170.pdf}
   \end{center}
-  \caption{Various grid configurations with the input matrix size N$_{x}$=150 and N$_{x}$=170\RC{idem}}
+  \caption{Various grid configurations with the input matrix size N$_{x}$=150 and N$_{x}$=170\RC{idem}
+\AG{Utiliser le point comme séparateur décimal et non la virgule.  Idem dans les autres figures.}}
   \label{fig:01}
 \end{figure}
 
@@ -587,7 +589,8 @@ the  network speed  drops down (variation of 12.5\%), the  difference between  t
 \begin{figure} [ht!]
 \centering
 \includegraphics[width=100mm]{cluster_x_nodes_n1_x_n2.pdf}
-\caption{Grid 2x16 and 4x8 with networks N1 vs N2}
+\caption{Grid 2x16 and 4x8 with networks N1 vs N2
+\AG{\np{8E-6}, \np{5E-6} au lieu de 8E-6, 5E-6}}
 \label{fig:02}
 \end{figure}
 %\end{wrapfigure}
@@ -612,7 +615,8 @@ the  network speed  drops down (variation of 12.5\%), the  difference between  t
 \begin{figure} [ht!]
 \centering
 \includegraphics[width=100mm]{network_latency_impact_on_execution_time.pdf}
-\caption{Network latency impacts on execution time}
+\caption{Network latency impacts on execution time
+\AG{\np{E-6}}}
 \label{fig:03}
 \end{figure}
 
@@ -646,7 +650,8 @@ magnitude with a latency of $8.10^{-6}$.
 \begin{figure} [ht!]
 \centering
 \includegraphics[width=100mm]{network_bandwith_impact_on_execution_time.pdf}
-\caption{Network bandwith impacts on execution time}
+\caption{Network bandwith impacts on execution time
+\AG{``Execution time'' avec un 't' minuscule}. Idem autres figures.}
 \label{fig:04}
 \end{figure}
 
@@ -814,7 +819,8 @@ geographically distant clusters through the internet.
     \hline
   \end{mytable}
 %\end{table}
- \caption{Relative gain of the multisplitting algorithm compared with the classical GMRES}
+ \caption{Relative gain of the multisplitting algorithm compared with the classical GMRES
+\AG{C'est un tableau, pas une figure}}
  \label{fig:07}
 \end{figure}
 
@@ -829,6 +835,10 @@ This work is partially funded by the Labex ACTION program (contract ANR-11-LABX-
 
 \bibliographystyle{wileyj}
 \bibliography{biblio}
+\AG{Des warnings bibtex à corriger (%
+  \texttt{entry type for "SimGrid" isn't style-file defined},
+  \texttt{empty booktitle in Bru95}%
+).}
 
 \end{document}
 
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