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@@ -201,18 +201,18 @@ AUTHORS: Charles Emile Ramamonjisoa, David Laiymani, Arnaud Giersch,
 
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 | Some knitpicks include:
 
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 | Some knitpicks include:

-| - Abstract: "Behaviours", please no plural
-| - Sec II (and others): "As exposed" --> "As described"
-| - Sec II: "And important idle times" --> better "useless idle times
-|   used for synchronization"
-| - Sec III: "by the mean of an XML file" --> "by means of an XML file".
-| - SEC IV.B: did not encouter ... unless some code debugging" -->
-|   please rewrite the unless part...
-| - SEC V: "Hosts processors power" --> "Host processor power"
+| [x] Abstract: "Behaviours", please no plural
+| [x] Sec II (and others): "As exposed" --> "As described"
+| [ ] Sec II: "And important idle times" --> better "useless idle times
+|     used for synchronization"
+| [x] Sec III: "by the mean of an XML file" --> "by means of an XML file".
+| [ ] SEC IV.B: did not encouter ... unless some code debugging" -->
+|     please rewrite the unless part...
+| [x] SEC V: "Hosts processors power" --> "Host processor power"

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 [RCE] On va prendre en compte ces remarques.
 `----
 
 [RCE] On va prendre en compte ces remarques.

- [AG] J'ai commencé pour les plus faciles.
+ [AG] J'ai commencé pour les plus faciles (cochées dans la liste ci-dessus).

 
 
 ----------------------- REVIEW 3 ---------------------
 
 
 ----------------------- REVIEW 3 ---------------------


@@ -256,7 +256,9 @@ AUTHORS: Charles Emile Ramamonjisoa, David Laiymani, Arnaud Giersch,
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 [RCE] ??
 `----
 
 [RCE] ??

- 
+[RC] En gros il nous critique car on a pris un problème trop simple.
+                On le sait, mais on fait de l'asynchrone. Donc on ne répondra pas à 
+                cette remarque. 

 
 ,----
 | 3) This is somewhat of a minor point, but I did not see an explicit
 
 ,----
 | 3) This is somewhat of a minor point, but I did not see an explicit


@@ -281,6 +283,7 @@ AUTHORS: Charles Emile Ramamonjisoa, David Laiymani, Arnaud Giersch,
       convergé: (k==MaxIter)or(X^k−X^k+1)<=epsilon, X sous-vecteur
       local de la solution et epsilon est la outer precision et donc
       la précision donnée dans la table I. 
       convergé: (k==MaxIter)or(X^k−X^k+1)<=epsilon, X sous-vecteur
       local de la solution et epsilon est la outer precision et donc
       la précision donnée dans la table I. 

+[RC]   J'ai ajouté un truc là dessus, section IV A

 
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 | 4) Typical latencies within clusters are on the order of a
 
 ,----
 | 4) Typical latencies within clusters are on the order of a