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-In this article, we have proven that the most general chaotic iterations based PRNG
-satisfy the property of chaos as defined by Devaney. We then have shown how to generate
-such functions together with the number of iterations, leading to strongly connected
+In this article, we have proven that the most general chaotic iterations based PRNG, which embeds 
+an iteration function, satisfies in some cases the property of chaos 
+as defined by Devaney. We then have shown how to generate such functions together 
+with the related number of iterations, leading to strongly connected

 iteration graphs and thus to chaos for the associated pseudorandom number generators. 
 By removing some paths in the hypercube, we then have provided examples of such graphs
 iteration graphs and thus to chaos for the associated pseudorandom number generators. 
 By removing some paths in the hypercube, we then have provided examples of such graphs

-that lead to chaos, while relating these graphs to the PRNG problem under consideration.
+that lead to chaos, while linking these graphs to the PRNG problem under consideration.

 
 In future work, we intend to understand the link between succeeded or failed statistical tests
 and the properties of chaos for the associated asynchronous iterations. By doing so,
 relations between desired statistically unbiased behaviors and topological properties will be
 understood, leading to better choices in iteration functions. Conditions allowing the
 reduction of the mixing time will be investigated too, while other modifications of the hypercube
 
 In future work, we intend to understand the link between succeeded or failed statistical tests
 and the properties of chaos for the associated asynchronous iterations. By doing so,
 relations between desired statistically unbiased behaviors and topological properties will be
 understood, leading to better choices in iteration functions. Conditions allowing the
 reduction of the mixing time will be investigated too, while other modifications of the hypercube

-will be regarded, in order to enlarge the set of known chaotic and random asynchronous 
+will be regarded in order to enlarge the set of known chaotic and random asynchronous 

 iterations.
 
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